it needs work
ill give you that the drawings weren't half bad
but you need to work on sound and story line
and a better ending
i look forward to future submissions
it needs work
ill give you that the drawings weren't half bad
but you need to work on sound and story line
and a better ending
i look forward to future submissions
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it was good
i like it was a good start to the series i like your next button on your text boxes
i though i was good
it was good i think you should have made it longer and more intresting like when the gomba was climbing up mario have mario freak out or something
Do you know how much work it would have been to make Mario freak out?? I mean, it would've taken like 5 minutes!!!
funny
dude right on this movie made my day but yea the ending was the only bad thing but good job!
cool
this is a good first sprite flash. few things you should do
1. make the fps (frames per second) 30
2. when making a movie clip watch it over and over to fix anything that will be noticable.
3. i noticed the explosion was wierd. you can find explosion sprites on
a sprite library.
4. put more things into the surrounding so we get more of an idea where the charaters are e.g in the field at the begining put in blades of grass clouds and a sun.
5. put the text into a text box
6. and add more sfx
other than that it was good
hmm
it was good. the voices were a little different i mean like one was loud and easy to hear then another was quiet and reverbed but both were still in the same room
the animation was good but the script was a little hard to follow (random)
but good job
Yeah, I have to fix those loudness and quietness things next time.
Thanks for the review.
sweet
it was sweet nice storyline and ending lol
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it was good at the start and your text was a little sloppy try to put it in a text box or something and i noticed that at the end where mario was thrusting. little white dots were around him and i know what you did i used to cut it out and try to erase the remaining white around him but in your "sprite editing program" see if you can make the bg trasparent and re export it.
good job
hey man, you did a good job and i hate when people critisize your work when it is your first try but you did really good looking forward to future submissons, i can't draw so i use spites lol
yes
man that just made my day the graphics were exelent and sound was superb.
voices made everything so much better and my favourite part was when magickarp
kick sonic's ass now being a fan of pokemon games i knew magickarp is worthless and weak i did not expect that that was awsome two thumbs up man!!!:D
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